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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Don't take me back.

    Lindsay, great job, it was one of the best short stories I've read. Hopefully there's part two! Can't wait for it! -Max

    Aug 7, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Blind, Bound, Bleeding.

    I liked it, it created a perfect scene. I liked alot. I felt like I was in pain. Keep writing!!!

    Aug 2, 2007
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Clive Barker's Undying

    I liked it, think it was creative. I have one word and that word happenes to be "Wow". Good job. Keep it up. :D -Max

    Aug 1, 2007
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I could talk to you forever

    I loved it... thats all I can say... because i'm breathless I want to read the next part!!!!

    Jul 28, 2007
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Alex DeJule

    Oh my gosh Marc... good job.. I liked it, I really liked it. Keep up the good work... but most of all keep writing. I think you did a great ...

    Jul 27, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: jelosy is not a game

    This was great Naarah, but I think that you could maybe use some spell check. I just wanna help I know today was your first day, so I won't be ...

    Jul 24, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Missing you...

    I think it was great, but I also think that it does need more, but other than that I loved it you should write more poetry I liked it good ...

    Jul 12, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Battlefield

    Very well done not like I have ever read in my life are you sure you didn't get that off of a popcical stick or a forture cookie?

    Mar 28, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: crying

    Yeah it's a bit scary but your on your way!!! sweet Kristina 8)

    Dec 21, 2006


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