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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Don't take me back.

    Lindsay, great job, it was one of the best short stories I've read. Hopefully there's part two! Can't wait for it! -Max

    Aug 7, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Blind, Bound, Bleeding.

    I liked it, it created a perfect scene. I liked alot. I felt like I was in pain. Keep writing!!!

    Aug 2, 2007
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Clive Barker's Undying

    I liked it, think it was creative. I have one word and that word happenes to be "Wow". Good job. Keep it up. :D -Max

    Aug 1, 2007
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I could talk to you forever

    I loved it... thats all I can say... because i'm breathless I want to read the next part!!!!

    Jul 28, 2007
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Alex DeJule

    Oh my gosh Marc... good job.. I liked it, I really liked it. Keep up the good work... but most of all keep writing. I think you did a great ...

    Jul 27, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: jelosy is not a game

    This was great Naarah, but I think that you could maybe use some spell check. I just wanna help I know today was your first day, so I won't be ...

    Jul 24, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Missing you...

    I think it was great, but I also think that it does need more, but other than that I loved it you should write more poetry I liked it good ...

    Jul 12, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Battlefield

    Very well done not like I have ever read in my life are you sure you didn't get that off of a popcical stick or a forture cookie?

    Mar 28, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: crying

    Yeah it's a bit scary but your on your way!!! sweet Kristina 8)

    Dec 21, 2006


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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